Naked with our Clothes On

So, tuesday I posted an old poem I wrote when I was around seventeen.  I figured, for the sake of comparison, that I'd post a song I've been working on, as of this week.  The lyrics are still a little rough, but hey, who the fuck cares, right?

It's a fairly pretty song, once you get the chords in on it.  Not sure how I feel about the whole thing, but would love feedback on the lyrics.

Regular funny/music/victoria updates resume tomorrow. 

Naked with our Clothes On

If I said I love you
would silence follow
or would you wince in pain?
I've never say it again
But I'd think it forever
and hope you'd change your mind
I can't change the way I think
like I can't change your mind
we're both naked with our clothes on
naked with our clothes on
in the dark with the light on
we're naked with our clothes on
if I never said a lie
would it change the course of time
or would it just ring out hollow
a sign of bad things to follow?
i'd like to think you've kept me
that i'm sitting at the back of your mind
you've kept me at the ready
for the day you change your mind
we're both naked with our clothes on
naked with our clothes on
slipping below the waters
we're naked with our clothes on.